The Secret of the Short Short Story – an intro
Here’s what I know about short-short story writing.
Title — a big part of the appeal, but can’t fix a poor opening line.
Opening sentence — if this doesn’t enlighten and entice your reader will stop
Opening paragraph — set the scene, provide local and date-driven color, and bring the reader along for a quick story
The story — there needs to be an arc, a reason we care
The ending — master the twist, but don’t overdo itThe best short-short stories are fun to read. They leave you having experienced an abbreviated adventure. They don’t take long to read, so you can read a handful, depending on your time. They don’t take too long to write. I can’t write a chapter or an article during my normal work hours. Doing a SSS is easy.
Interleaved Letter Sequences (101 short-short stories)
/ˌin(t)ərˈlēv/ def: the interspersing of fields or channels of different meaning sequentially in memory.
* not one of these characters is real, this is short fiction.
- Dead End (black ice)
- Two Senses Clash (anesthesia)
- White Ennui (a good job)
- Holding Space (an inhospitable place)
- Ecstacy of St. Francis (gentle mystic)
- A Chemistry of Spirits (memories and conversations)
- Walking Along the Edge (snow blind)
- Forget the Last Thing I Said (self)
- Woman Overwhelmed (furious patience)
- When In Paris (portrait of the artist)
- Generational Wealth (preschool friends)
- “I Don’t Have Orgasms,” She Said (online hookup)
- What Is It About New York? (aspirational growth)
- There Were No Wise Men (two asses talking)
- Skedaddle (on the volcano)
- Out the Window (harbinger of pain)
- Alexa Is Running the Show (adverse intelligence)
- Vape Vape Everything’s Fine (addiction)
- Blue Man Shopping (what’s the big idea)
- Dance Lesson No. 2 (smooth jazz)
- Crushing Static (torture and teeth)
- Neuroplasticity (and affirmations)
- In Other Words (duo lingo)
- Sublingual (word seeking)
- I Do Know It’s Me (naturally high)
- The Oddest Thing (practically sane)
- Pick and Choose (fatherless)
- Nothing On Pornhub (lesbian tendencies)
- The Metaverse Describes Itself (ChatGPT Gives It a Go)
- Her Love Was Strong (what are you drinking?)
- Deep Fake (looking in the wrong places)
- The Eyes Have It (lethal moments)
- Music In the Car (asimov’s gambit)
- Girl in the Pool (am I high or dreaming)
- A Moment Frozen in Time (the divorce brochure)
- Saying “I’m Sorry” Doesn’t Make it Better (don’t ask me again)
- Privacy Rising (your phone is bleeding)
- Now That I’ve Danced Myself Out of the Room (missing the big love)
- What Is Your Deepest Intention? (I’ve been good too long)
- Just In Time for the Butterflies (every ending is a new beginning)
- Learning Loneliness (seeking my own adventure)
- The Hidden Message (previous lovers)
- Your Halo Is Not Here (two women)
- Forgetting the Danger ( icy water)
- Pressure of Starlight (what is emerging)
- The Longest Last Winter Together (losing my head)
- Eloquence Lost (creative happiness)
- Out of the Loop (passing shots)
- I Can Be Whatever You Want (beginning and ending)
- The Mosquito (losing blood)
- If I Could Talk I’d Tell You (she forgot to mention)
- We’ll Always Have Nola (drinks in the quarter)
- Killing Starlings (we’re all mad here)
- The Last Amazing Cat (me and my shadow)
- Escape Velocity (darkness visible)
- Lover Falls (everyone loves a puppy)
- Sorry, Yes (a shaggy dog story)
- Misty Morning at the Lake (losing Vermont)
- A Few Lurid Details (quest for love)
- You Know They Put Wires In Your Heart, Right? (carto vizigo)
- Sons and Lovers (i still dream of your kiss)
- A Slow Bleeding Out (lover’s leap)
- Rather Not Write About Her (seeking release)
- I Want to Disappear (final respects)
- Telling Detail (that’s Mr. Bradbury to you)
- Doing What You Hate (emotional variability)
- The High Way (a new puppy)
- Sprint By Sprint (rehoming)
- The Luckiest Man Alive (is this your dog?)
- The Most Beautiful Girl’s Sadness (her hair, her hair was alive)
- “Sorry” Won’t Suffice (it’s not always about you)
- Losing Eva (i tried to be nice)
- A Dangerous View (snowbird)
- From the Flip Side (manager miscue)
- Satellites of Love (aglow in orbit)
- Flawed Treasure Maps (near misses at happiness)
- Listen to the Sound of My Voice ( illuminating ghosts)
- Behind My House (rain for days)
- The Empty Home of a Heart in Trouble* (love has nothing to do with it)
- Delays Expected (I have something to show you)
- The Future Is An Attitude (life at altitude)
- Coffee and Air Conditioning (baby, it’s hot outside)
- Something In the Way (let’s stay home tonight)
- Start at the Ending (don’t spoil it for me)
- Just Like Eating a Banana (ust a banana story)
- The Ping is the Thing (are you receiving me?)
- This Remains a Love Story (she’s around)
- International Cat Day (laughing with the dogs)
- The Monkeypox Roundtable (the girl with ja wobble)
- You’re On Mute (online dating)
- Translation Not Found (vacation complications)
- Unavoidable Trouble (musical cute girl)
- Early Riser (at the end of a marriage)
- Survival (nline dating — first date)
- Pixels of You (single dad and his daughter)
- Heart On (client-therapist privilege)
- Ambien and Me (closing moments of a relationship)
- Hawk Power (tennis fetish)
- Asimov’s Dream (golden opportunity)
- Heaven Is a Place (opening gambit of love)
- Only a Week Since My Lover Left (breakups are confusing)
End of first book of short-short stories.
words, language and innovation (or The King of the Short-Short Story)
- I Write (to prove something)
- Discovery (core drive)
- Inconceivable (happy holidays)
- Write Your Heart Out (and the day job)
- Zoom In (the writer’s room)
- Gladiator USA Jr. (unlimited)
- Moms-Who (funny or die)
- Couple Things (about facebook)
- The Dumb Stuff I’m Going To Do Today (you?)
- When You Believe There Are No Accidents (synchronicity)
- Impatience (in a mood)
- Imaginary Life (all there is)
- Influencers & Broadcasters (tweet me)
- And the player was love. (meta meta meta)
- Jettison Fury (parenting in time and space)
- King of the Short-Short Story (ain’t me)
- Give Up Now (not Lassy)
- The First Man of Letters (soft porn)
- Great American Coming of Age (work in progress)
- Mortal Coils and All That (shuffling our decks)
- A Shrinking Discovery (eco-health update)
- Saddest Maserati (in the rain)
- TikTok Knocking (dancing around the data)
- Alexa Has Left the Building (spy bots)
- Every Donut Not Eaten (missing pieces)
- Office 365 Almost Gets Smart (my AI)
- The Pipes Might Burst (frigid winter storm)
- Imaginary Girl (spider & snake)
- How Long Do We Spend Mourning Our Dead Facebook Friends? (requiem)
- If That One Thing Had Not Happened (things would be…)
- Accidental Drag Show (and bingo)
- She Had Everything (seeing red)
- Not Much of a Drinker (developing a taste)
- Daily Drunk (one more)
- I’ve Seen All Good People (in Teslas)
- Intoxicating Kisses (something is broken)
- Gone to the Dogs (who’s in charge?)
- Call of the Big City (seeking a moment)
- Stupid Money (driving school teslas)
- Drinks Unhinged (and singing)
- Angry Muscles (passing by)
- Fleet of Teslas (driving and crying)
- My AI Girlfriend (how do I say…)
- Non-Binary Ambition (hip bones)
- Walk of Emmaus (contemporary hymns)
- GF 1 (a lion tattoo)
- My AI Lover (wifi passwords)
- The Last Known Poet (tweets to no one)
- Her Woo-Woo Therapist (had an answer)
- A Gigantic Cock (in the front yard)
- The Second Coming (Jesus.AI)
- Werewolf (the youngest child)
- Native Texan (before AC)
- Cimarron (My Last Good Summer)
- Nuts Roasted (overnight)
- It Took Her A While (to leave)
- Tales of the Tilted Planet (drinking water)
- Fire Alarm (what’s the emergency?)
- Morning Ritual (in my father’s house)
- Trip with My Dad (Fear and Loathing in Texas)
- Not Lake People (outdoor adventure)
- Dreaming In Code (my son)
- A Hunger Unquenched (battle mountain)
- Fern (is an adult)
- His Dad Was Different (and alive)
- Hot Tub in the Rain (plateau of hope)
- Year In Rock Challenge (my life)
- War 3.0 (nanO)
- Blood Lust (thanksgiving)
- The Beautiful Rao
- Seeing it Through to the End
- Wrestling Ghosts
- Cold Dead Hands
- A Glass of Ennui
- One Tangerine in Chinatown
- Lasting Image of Her
- Duplicate Living
- Unwavering Band of Light
- In 1973
- Second Date
- How It Ends for Us
- I Need A New Best Friend
- Tall Tales and Tiny Lies
in progress
*do you think that missing Oxford comma is going to anger some?
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